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"Same bed, but it feels just a little bit bigger now
Our song on the radio, but it don't sound the same
When our friends talk about you all that it does is just tear me down
Cause my heart breaks a little when I hear your name
And it all just sounds like ooo~"

I has been weeks since (Name) and Gilbert have broken up, and it was tearing Gilbert apart. He barely left the house, and when he did, people were always talking about you, or giving him pity.

~~~Flashback to Yesterday~~~

Gilbert was talked into leaving the house because of Antonio and Francis. They said that he needed to talk to his friends. But Gilbert knew for a fact that there was no one who could ever compare to you. Your smile made his heart stop, your (h/l), (h/c) hair was always soft and silky, everything about you was...just perfect. So anyway, he went to Antonio's house and in the living room was Alfred, Matthias, and Eliza. Antonio and Francis sat down, but Gilbert remained standing.

"Hey...Gilbert how are you feeling?" 

"Miserable." Eliza just sunk in her seat.

"I heard (Name) moved on already." Eliza hoped that her words would make him give up on (Name).

'(Name) is not good enough for him, but I am.' She thought.

"With who?" 

'Oh...So she's already moved on...' Gilbert thought, feeling even worse.

"A certain Russian swept her of her feet." Eliza walked over to him and whispered in his ear,

"So it looks like you're all mine..."   

"Screw this, I'm going home." Gilbert got up and left.

~~~End of Flashback~~~

Gilbert was still questioning why didn't he treat you better? Why did he treat you like garbage? Why didn't spend as much time with you as did when you first started going out? He wished he could take it back, but now he can't, because you're gone.

"Hmmm too young, too dumb to realize
That I should have bought you flowers and held your hand
Should have gave you all my hours when I had the chance
Take you to every party cause all you wanted to do was dance
Now my baby is dancing, but she's dancing with another man."

~~~Flashback to Last Month~~~

"Gil, Antonio invited us to his party, we should go." (Name) said, a party ment dancing, and boy, did she love to dance.

"No, thanks." Gilbert said flatly.

"Come on, you never want to go. Please?" She asked.

"(Name), no."

"But you promised."

"(Name), I said I don't want to go! Got it?!" He instantly felt regret for shouting at you. He never yelled at you, not even once.

"Fine." (Name) said, with sparkling tears welling in her now sad (e/c) eyes. She turned to leave.

"(Name), I'm-" Gilbert was cut off by the door slamming.


~~~End of Flashback~~~

"My pride, my ego, my needs and my selfish ways
Caused a good strong woman like you to walk out my life
Now I never, never get to clean up the mess I made
And it haunts me every time I close my eyes
It all just sounds like ooo~"

Gilbert seriously hated himself for telling you that in everything that you wore made you look fat, that you needed to lose weight, and every other girl would look much better than you would. How he regretted every mean word he said to you.

~~~Flashback to 3 Weeks Ago~~~

For once, Gilbert was taking (Name) to a party. She was so excited, finally Gilbert was taking her to a party! She brought a new dress, along with a pair of heels and some accesories. (………

She changed into it then went over to Gilbert's house. Once (Name) saw him she asked,

"How do I look?" 

"You look okay...Anyway are you ready to go?" He didn't even care.

"Okay? I just look okay to you?!" (Name) yelled.

"Yeah, you really don't put any effort into dressing up do you?" No effort? Bullshit.

"You know what? I don't want to go anymore...I'm going home." Then she left, again with tears in her eyes.

~~~End Flashback~~~

"Too young, too dumb to realize
That I should have bought you flowers and held your hand
Should have gave all my hours when I had the chance
Take you to every party cause all you wanted to do was dance
Now my baby is dancing, but she's dancing with another man."

There was a party tonight, and he knew you were going to be there...with Ivan. He dragged himself out of his bed and did his best to get ready.

~~~Time Skip to the Party!~~~

When he walked through the door there you were, as stunning as ever in your (f/c), (favorite dress style) dress. As expected, with Ivan, dancing the night away.

"Although it hurts I'll be the first to say that I was wrong
Oh, I know I'm probably much too late
To try and apologize for my mistakes
But I just want you to know
I hope he buys you flowers, I hope he holds your hand
Give you all his hours when he has the chance
Take you to every party cause I remember how much you loved to dance"

Gilbert walked up to the both of you.

"Hello, (Name), Ivan."

"H-Hi, Gilbert." (Name) said, unsure of what was going to happen.

"I just came to apologize for what happened between us, I was very unawesome. And I hope Ivan treats you way better than I did." And with that Gilbert turned towards Ivan.

"You, spend everyday with her, her favorite flowers are (f/f) buy them for her very often, and take her every party possible, because she loves to dance. Do all the things I should have done. And treat her like a queen because she definitely deserves it." And with that Gilbert left , with tears in the corner of his eyes, and leaving a shocked (Name) behind.

"Do all the things I should have done when I was your man
Do all the things I should have done when I was your man"
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Lforeverisa Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014
Yes!!!!! I'm with Ivan now!!!! Sorry Gil but I love Ivan the most!!!
SupGal317 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
my feels man(or woman) feels.........
TreatHalloween Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
FabulousCthulhu Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Professional General Artist
:iconsobbplz: mi kokoro...
Ridleyboo Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Writer
Poor Gilbert and gilbird
A-cosplayingnerd Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Hyo38 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
See you Ivan. Gilbert here I come.
shadowslayer66 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
dang it now im crying
ILoveXReader Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ~</3
Tag-San Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
RIGHT IN THE FEELS!! :cryforeverplz: I'm gonna miss you so much Gil... :cryforeverplz: :cryforeverplz:

On the bright side I have the sweet lovable teddy bear known at Ivan... But still... They are two of my fave characters so I can't chose and my feels are all over the place!!! :sobbplz:
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