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Chapter 2: Secret Revealed

~~~~(Name)'s POV~~~~

'Why does god hate me? Why? Of all people I could have bumped into it HAD to be the BTT! Well this is fantastic...' (Name) thought in her head, dreading every second. 

"Are you okay chica~?"

"I'm fine and goodbye." 

Francis conveniently got out of his daze and said "Oh look it iz the girl with ze nice ass. Wanna go out?"

(Name)'s eye twitched violently

'People are REALLY pushing it today aren't they?'

"So~"

"So?"

"Obviously, you are going to accept my offer."

"How about a no?"

"WHAT?!"

'Great Francis' fangirls are here. Yay, what a GREAT day.' (Name) thought sarcastically. 

"How could you not go out with after he asked YOU which I don't understand. But you could have, no, you SHOULD have said yes since he asked a loser like you!"

"Who says I should?!" 

"We do!"

"Just because you people are freaking stalking this guy doesn't mean that I have to!"

"Well, he is out your league anyway...I mean look at you. He's popular you're just a loser who can never amount to anything, so why don't you just leave?"

"First of all, I don't take orders from a slut...and second of all..."

(Name) punched that girl right in the face for real this time. 

"I don't care what you people say about me." Okay, part of that was a lie.

Then she ran down the hall AWAY from those maniacs.

~~~~Prussia POV~~~~

'I vonder vhat her name is...But DAMN that girl can punch! I think she broke that girl's nose. She will be on my radar from now on.'

~~~~TIME SKIP LUNCHTIME!~~~~

Me and the rest of the BTT were sitting at our usual table with the rest of the popular crowd. I got up to go to the bathroom.
"Hey Gilbert~! Where are you going~?" Damn it's Dolly.

"To the bathroom."

"Maybe I can...come with you?" she said seductively. Tempting but...

"No thanks."

I walked past the auditorium and heard someone singing...

~~~~(Name)'s POV~~~~

"I wouldn't wanna be anybody else
You made me insecure,
Told me I wasn't good enough.
But who are you to judge
When you're a diamond in the rough?
I'm sure you got some things
You'd like to change about yourself.
But when it comes to me
I wouldn't want to be anybody else.

Na na na na na na na na na na na na na
Na na na na na na na na na na na na na

I'm no beauty queen
I'm just beautiful me

Na na na na na na na na na na na na na
Na na na na na na na na na na na na na

You've got every right
To a beautiful life
C'mon

Who says, who says you're not perfect?
Who says you're not worth it?
Who says you're the only one that's hurtin'?
Trust me, that's the price of beauty
Who says you're not pretty?
Who says you're not beautiful?
Who says?

It's such a funny thing
How nothing's funny when it's you
You tell 'em what you mean
But they keep whiting out the truth
It's like a work of art
That never gets to see the light
Keep you beneath the stars
Won't let you touch the sky

Na na na na na na na na na na na na na
Na na na na na na na na na na na na na

I'm no beauty queen
I'm just beautiful me

Na na na na na na na na na na na na na
Na na na na na na na na na na na na na

You've got every right
To a beautiful life
C'mon

Who says, who says you're not perfect?
Who says you're not worth it?
Who says you're the only one that's hurtin'?
Trust me, that's the price of beauty
Who says you're not pretty?
Who says you're not beautiful?
Who says?

Who says you're not star potential?
Who says you're not presidential?
Who says you can't be in movies?
Listen to me, listen to me
Who says you don't pass the test?
Who says you can't be the best?
Who said, who said?
Won't you tell me who said that?
Yeah, who said?

Who says, who says you're not perfect? 
Who says you're not worth it? 
Who says you're the only one that's hurtin'? 
Trust me, that's the price of beauty 
Who says you're not pretty?
Who says you're not beautiful? 
Who says?

Who says, Who says, you're not perfect?
Who says you're not worth it?
Who says you're the only one that's hurtin'?

Who says, who says you're not perfect?
Who says you're not worth it?
Who says you're the only one that's hurtin'?
Trust me, that's the price of beauty
Who says you're not pretty?
Who says you're not beautiful?
Who says?

Who says you're not perfect?
Who says you're not worth it?
Who says you're the only one that's hurtin'?
Trust me, that's the price of beauty
Who says you're not pretty? 
Who says?"


I always sang that song to make me feel better but no one knew that I could sing. And I MEAN no one. It was always a secret until...I heard clapping behind me...

Lyrics:[link]
Ohhhh it's a cliffy! I WILL leave you guys hanging until the next one! But it won't be who you expect it to be...MUHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH!
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: In the auditorium
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4:[link]
Chapter 5:[link]
Chapter 6:[link]
Chapter 7:[link]
Chapter 8:[link]
Chapter 9:[link]
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:iconkittykatrocks12:
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh Great, today is not my day
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animefluttershyluna Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
damn
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:icontiger-lily-swift:
tiger-lily-swift Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
FUCK WHY I LOVE SELENE BUT WHY HER AND HEF FUCKING WHO SAYS.LOOK,I SAY DAMN GOOD STORY KAY BRUH KAY.
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Emo-Chaan Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014   General Artist
\(\( >O< )/)/
Am I the only one who doesn't like Selena Gomez?
I'm too punk rock for dat music =w=


lol
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LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMAIGAWSH! congratulations on making me cry! I have feels of steel and this made me tear up! Clap  (Gosh I'm so weird No, I disagree!  )
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Demonblade9001 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the song, though id be singing dont mess with me or something close to that.
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ShadowUmbreon84 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
OMG SECRET'S OUT! I'M LEAVIN' THE COUNTRY! :o (Eek) 
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:iconjadethekidr9:
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014   General Artist
Me: :icondramaticdeanplz: SH*T! IVE BEEN EXPOSED!! 
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:iconartemiswest:
ArtemisWest Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Lana here.

Umm... How did you know that no one knows I can sing?? So many mind readers on deviantart...
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SoccerStrider01 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
I heard this song on disney and immediately whent home and bought It its so amazing ^_^
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:iconkathybrine:
KathyBrine Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Once again, someone give me an axe in here.....
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:iconinazumaelevenrocks:
InazumaElevenRocks Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
Who says by Selena Gomez, you've got a really good choice ! oh and story is AWESOME like The awesome Prussia !
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:iconcloeorihira:
CloeOrihira Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
Yay i lunched a bitch in the face!
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:iconspikeymacksy:
SpikeyMacksy Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
ld be laughing cause i tend to laugh at messed up stuff like that...

i like blood.. don;'t like veins and needles though
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AleItaly1998 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"until...I heard clapping behind me..."
Me:...................................................................FUCK.
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:iconeverybodydotheflop65:
everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Now THIS is me!
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:iconhuskeygirl3:
Huskeygirl3 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm proud of myself punching Dolly's fake,stupid,ass licking face.
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:iconlozgamer316:
LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HAIL YEAHS! :iconmovebetchplz:
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:iconcalitheanimelover:
CaliTheAnimeLover Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE THAT SONG...and this fanfic
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:iconwubwubized:
Wubwubized Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconmovebetchplz:
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pokemon7777 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconlightlaughplz:
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:iconjambalambam:
jambalambam Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
F:DGUYJSFGHOIUDFYTGKYUH
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S-adie Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Student General Artist
[link] nightcore of the song =D
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Xsign-of-fireX Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I had to read through half the song before I figured out what it was. . . I was all like "Oh, I see the words 'diamond in the rough' and think Shawn Colvin, but those are not her lyrics. . ." *shot*
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hetalialover17 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AWESOME AWESOME What is the song
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:iconhetailiauniverse-xd:
HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
Who Says by Selena Gomez
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:iconhetalia-spain:
Hetalia-Spain Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
((WOMAN. QUIT LEAVING ME HANGING. D: WHO CLAPPED?!))
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:iconhetailiauniverse-xd:
HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Writer
Not telling anyone...You will have to wait until next week...
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:iconhetalia-spain:
Hetalia-Spain Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
((:iconsulkplz: Kay..))
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hetalialover17 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WAIT NEXT WEEK FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
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HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
Got you!
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stupidbread Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
I just happened to be listening to Cinderella Cage~Kagome Kagome while reading this, so I sung "Eientewi" in my head instead. >w< I'm a nub.
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:iconhetailiauniverse-xd:
HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Student Writer
Lol
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Alissy123 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconmoarplz:
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:iconhetailiauniverse-xd:
HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Writer
OF course there will be moar
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Alissy123 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconfuckyeahamericaplz:
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goodlucklight Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The clapping is Prussia, da?
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:iconhetailiauniverse-xd:
HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Student Writer
NOT telling
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kittygirl1351883 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dolly, Francis, Antonio the bitch girl?
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:iconhetailiauniverse-xd:
HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
Not telling you...
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:iconkittygirl1351883:
kittygirl1351883 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cooooome ooooooon!
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HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
Nope :iconbitchpleaseplz:
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kittygirl1351883 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssseeeeeeee!!!
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HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
:iconhellnoplz:
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kittygirl1351883 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hellz yes you will!!!
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HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Writer
:iconfucknoplz:
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