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~~~~(Name)'s POV~~~~
"(Name), i'm-"

"(Name)! There's something you should know...the recording that Dolly showed you was fake and she threw herself at Gilbert and kissed him it wasn't his fault at all." (A/N: Don't you just wish life's problems easily worked out? =.= )

"Well I guess that explains everything..." I said.

"Now I can do vhat I've been vanting to do all day..."

'Is he going to...'

"(Name) will you meet me at my house later?"
  
'A swing and a miss...'
        
"Sure..."

"Wear something nice. See you later!"

~~~~TIME SKIP OF LOVE!~~~~

'I wonder what he is up to...strange albino...'

For the first time in a long time I was wearing...a....dress. I felt weird...
Well, I knocked on the door and an Italian man answered the door.

"Germanyyyyyyyy~ There's a pretty bella at the door~!"

Then Gilbert came.

"She's mine Feli." Gilbert said.

"What I'm an object now? And I don't remember being your girlfriend." I stated smirking.

"Ouch." He said acting hurt.

"Well can you explain to me why i'm standing in a dress, at your house?"

"That vill come soon...Your hand please."

I sighed and took his hand and he led me with my eyes closed somewhere. 

"Are you ready?"

"Do it."

I removed his hands from my eyes and I saw the most beautiful thing ever. (A/N: www.hotdateideas.com/images/da… This is it.)

The lights were so beautiful.

"Please say that you like it." He asked.

"Nope, I love it."

"Good."

"Dinner time!"

~~~~TIME SKIP!~~~~

Gilbert got out of his chair and got on his knees next to mine.

"(Name) (Last Name), vill you please give me the awesome honor to be your boyfriend?"

"Yes!"
~~~~1 month after High School Graduation(1 year 1 month)~~~~

How things ended up was crazy.

A year ago, I would have never thought that my bulling would stop.
Or that I would have a lot of friends.
Or being close to the BTT.(When they're NOT groping me of course =.= )
Or me and Gilbert falling in love.

I just guess we had an Unexpected Fate.


THE END T.T
Thanks for all the faves! But this story is over! :iconmaybeplz:
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4:[link]
Chapter 5:[link]
Chapter 6:[link]
Chapter 7:[link]
Chapter 8:[link]
Chapter 9: The End~!
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:iconparalyzed-chan:
Paralyzed-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  New member
Not trying to be a bitch but...
Bella already means 'beautiful'..
Sorry if I piss you off...
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Cahier-Orange Featured By Owner Edited Jan 9, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
this story is great~
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animeloverfrom2000 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  New member
Finally the followers stand up for themselves!! Yes!! I loved the story and envy how fast the problems had disappeared for reader-chan
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chasitythewolf Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
Ha! That's the story title! =7=
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cancerleovirgo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
CUTE!
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Addiestar-of-froclan Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
MIEN GOTT~ I luv this story because the reader actually stands up for herself against the bullies~!
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tiger-lily-swift Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
Me:Fuck yeah!Awesome shist you made here!
Gilbert:Calm down fraulein.
Me:YOU AREN'T MAH BOSS ONLEH MAH BOYFRIEND!
BTT:*sweatdrop*
Me:Omagerd you wimps....
Francis:Non...
Me:OH YEAH IM AWESOME-R THAN GILLY!!!FUCK THE WHOLE BULLSHITTY WORLD!!!!!
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Carlli2000 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Student Artist
So cute!!
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nilza999 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 14, 2014  Student General Artist
:imcryingrainbowssomuchplz:
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PrussiaIsAwesomeMan Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student General Artist
:iconyayprussiaplz: This was so cute ;o;
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LucianoVargas132 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
AWWWWWWWWWWWW~! I wish there was more.. this was so awesome!
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xXOneHellOfAGamerXx Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your Icon....

OMG WANT
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:iconsonadilverponylover1:
DAVID TENNANT!!! DOCTOR WHO!!! I DIN'T WANTO GO!!!! Gosh I'm a fan :P
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spirk123 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
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animewafflelover21 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
Wouldn't Gilbert punch the others?
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Someotakufreak Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014   General Artist
MAYBE.
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LuxaraiZilaMF Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Writer
I wanna scream in joy becuz I'm in fangurl heaven but everyone's asleep xD
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FairyTailMage17 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student Artist
I-I l-l-loved it!!!!!!!
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LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
9/10. (don't feel like u need to get better to get 10/10, btw. 9/10 is the highest u can get from me. i never rate anything 10/10)
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DragonballLover99 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful
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Shaliliathehedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Make a sequel plreasseeeee!!! I LUV the story SOOOOO much!!! X3

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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting series I liked it
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XXEMOhetaliafangirlX Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Student Filmographer
Bunny-Emoji-04-(Awesome) That was good
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CupcakesYum1 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconclapplz: PERFECT!!!!! :iconrainbowlplz:
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Addiestar-of-froclan Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
And then my computer crashed T.T
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tiger-lily-swift Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
Never do this again
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tiger-lily-swift Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
Omyfuckingod lag much?
#lagging#icons#fuck
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SupGal317 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
how do u do that D: can u pwease show meh
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XIamAwsomeX Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Student Writer
THE LAG ISTOO MUCH
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Waterbenderbre Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
HOLY CRAP MY FACE HOLES!
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pinkamenadianapies Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
My eyes...They're bleeding rainbows :iconimcryingrainbowssomuchplz"
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CupcakesYum1 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconbleedrainbowplz: <----This? :iconpervyprussiaplz: Rainbow tears
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pinkamenadianapies Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
I'm an idiot TT-TT but close enough :| ya now bro just...just close enough XD cuz I'm that stupid I don't know why...I just am 
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CupcakesYum1 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
We are all so stupid at times :iconpervycanadaplz: Dont worry im stupid too
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pinkamenadianapies Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
yay 
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pinkamenadianapies Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
I never understood why the yay people are naked but oh well X3 they must have been so happy they stripped down naked XD
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pinkamenadianapies Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
(Oh noes its not real or something) D:
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HetaliaLover696969 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
Broham, mah eyezzz had a spaz attack frum yo commy~! :iconspazzattackplz:
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CupcakesYum1 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DAT ICON THO! :iconmingflailplz: ITS SO FABOULUS
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Flames-of-awesome Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
p.s. I think my icon has the expression I made when I read this! X3
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MikailaThePerv Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BEST THING EVER
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YuriGirlLove Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconepicclapplz: BEST STORY EVERRRRRR
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shadowslayer66 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist

"hey y/n wanna come to my house " he said

 

"ohhh god if he rapes me but ill trust him..............for now"y/n thought

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xToxicFlossx Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well that escalated quickly *shot*
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SpideyPoolLover Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013
No,SlientGirl888,I also screamed out rape.
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:iconsilentgirl888:
SilentGirl888 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
"(Name) will you meet me at my house later?"

…Was I the only one who screamed out RAPE?
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SwagWagon101 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
NOPE
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SilentGirl888 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank god
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SwagWagon101 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
weeeeh
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