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~~~~(Name)'s POV~~~~
I took the stage standing in front of everyone.

"Why does everyone have to bully me?" I asked.

Dolly stepped up and said "Because we don't like you!" 

"What did I do to any of you?"

The whole auditorium fell silent.

"You see, everyone is just following everyone else to be "popular"." I stated.

"Exactly, following the popular crowd can get you somewhere may-" I cut her off.

"Save it Dolly!" 

Dolly made a face at me and flipped her hair.

"As I was saying, why follow everyone else when you can just be yourself?"

"Who says they're not being themselves?" Dolly said.

"Raise your hand if you feel like you're being what someone else what you to be, specifically, Dolly."

Almost everyone raised their hands.

"You come up here!"

I called Dolly's main slave Claire to the stage.

"What do you like to do?"

"Help Dolly, Do Dolly's hair-"

"No Dolly what YOU like to do?"

"Um, I like to play the violin."

"Are you in the talent show?"

"No..."

"Why?"

"Because Dolly said the talent show is only for the queen of the school, which she says is her."

"Why do you listen to her anyway?"

"Because she says if we don't do what she says, she'll bully us too."

"You see people! I'm not the bad guys here she is!" Everyone started to agree with me.

"Shut up! Girls go get her and bring her to me for torturing." Dolly commanded.

Not one girl moved.

"Well, you guys are just gonna stand there? Chop! Chop!"

"Shut the fuck up Dolly!" Claire said.

"Well, well, well, look who grew some balls." Dolly retorted.

"Yeah, Now I can do this." Claire punched Dolly right in her nose.

"WHAT THE HELL?!"


Everyone started to boo her, then she just ran out of the auditorium.

Before she left she said, "I'm so transferring schools!"

I never felt so happy in my life I even smiled.

"You shouldn't hide that beautiful smile from the vorld you know."

The smile was immeditatley wiped off my face when I saw Gilbert, guess I have another issue to deal with...
Yay Dolly the Bitch is freaking gone!
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4:[link]
Chapter 5:[link]
Chapter 6:[link]
Chapter 7:[link]
Chapter 8:The Bitch is so GONE!
Chapter 9:[link]
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:iconbandanasquad2nd:
Bandanasquad2nd Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2015  Student Artist
Good job me!
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:iconpikachu45638:
pikachu45638 Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Am I a dolly minion or something? Claire and Claire(me) could be BFFS!
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:iconcassb135:
CassB135 Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2015  New Deviant
I'm glad Dolly has been defeated. I had no witty and rude remarks about her name *growing mushrooms* Mushrooms for sale! 1 mushroom for a witty remark about bitches!
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Doodle-master11 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
LET THE PEACE BE RESTORED! ALL WHO HEARD OF THE DEFEAT OF THE HORRIBLE TYRANT DOLLY RAN THROUGH THE STREETS. THEY DANCED WITH JOY, AND SHOUTED,

"LET THE BIACH BURN IN HELL!"
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:iconkittykatrocks12:
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Fuck You Dolly, I'm glad you're gone
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:iconparalyzed-chan:
Paralyzed-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015
LET THY PEACE BE RESTORED TO THY CHILDREN OF EPICNESS.
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:iconcomedywiz411:
Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014   Writer
Me: *pulls out baseball bat/club shaped like a giant fried chicken wing* I WANNA HIT HER TOO!! *tries to run after her! but is pulled back by Prussia* NO! LEMME AT HER!!!! LEMME AT HER!!!!
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:iconlunaangel-eclipse:
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DING DONG THE WICKED WITCH IN DEAD
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:iconlozgamer316:
LoZGamer316 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Melting sequence 
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:iconlunaangel-eclipse:
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^W^ That was the perfect icon!
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:iconsupreeeeeeeemee:
Supreeeeeeeemee Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So long, f*cking biotch!
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:iconjadethekidr9:
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014   General Artist
YEPP!!! HA HA SO LONG BEITCH!! 
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:iconlunaangel-eclipse:
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ha! i dissed her! ON STAGE! 


hellz to the YES!
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:iconelka-sakamaki:
Elka-Sakamaki Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Student General Artist
-dancing crazily for the past 20 days- YES .
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:iconjaylinthecat:
JaylinTheCat Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
FINALLY I wanted to so badly Dolly's followers to stand up to dolly 

My life is completeJump Emoticon 
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:iconxxemohetaliafangirlx:
XXEMOhetaliafangirlX Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Student Filmographer
bunneh icon1  Fuck yeeaaaaaa!!!
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:iconx-immortalheichou-x:
X-ImmortalHeichou-X Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconamericahappyspazzplz: THIS STORY IS SO GOOD SO FAR
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:iconcureearth:
CureEarth Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
FUCK YEA! NOW THE SLUT IS GONE. PEACE SHALL BE RESTORED!
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:iconxofandompridexo:
xofandompridexo Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Hells to THE YEAH!!!! SHE GONE NOW NO MORE SULTRY BITCH!! :)
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:iconcydoniaknights0317:
CydoniaKnights0317 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
:yeehaw: AWWWWYEEAHH BITCHES!!!!
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:iconhetaliabangtheoryfan:
hetaliabangtheoryfan Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
"Shut the fuck up Dolly!" Claire said.
me: :iconawwyeahplz: AWWWWWW YEAAAAAAAAHHHHH
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:iconcydoniaknights0317:
CydoniaKnights0317 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
me:*dead on floor laughing*
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:iconhetaliabangtheoryfan:
hetaliabangtheoryfan Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
o.o shit i killed someone *puts on a red wig and packs my bags* THEY WON'T FIND ME IN SCOTLAND! *runs*
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:iconcydoniaknights0317:
CydoniaKnights0317 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
TAKE ME WITH YOU!!
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:iconhetaliabangtheoryfan:
hetaliabangtheoryfan Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
*grabs you arm and dashes off faster than a speeding Rainbow Dash* TO SCOTLAND!
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:iconcydoniaknights0317:
CydoniaKnights0317 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
AWWWW YEAHHHH!
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:iconhetaliabangtheoryfan:
hetaliabangtheoryfan Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
:iconawwyeahplz:
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:iconnilza999:
nilza999 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Faster than a speeding Rainbow Dash!  *BROHOOF*
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:iconjessthepegasus:
JessThePegasus Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
At the end I started cheering XD 
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:iconseerofheros:
seerofheros Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Soma: bitch be gone!!
Me: I'm still killing her
Soma: fine with me
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:icontrainernight:
trainernight Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
FLIP YAY GOOD BYE BIATCH!!!!!!!! :iconhappyprussiaplz:
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:iconhuskeygirl3:
Huskeygirl3 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me*looks at Gil smug*sup biach.:D
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:iconhuskeygirl3:
Huskeygirl3 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Funny... My method of revenge is also singing...and forgiveness.
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:icontea-and-tai:
tea-and-tai Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Student General Artist
YEAH! RUN BITCH! RUN!
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:iconzimfan12:
zimfan12 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
man. I was hoping to kill her or something. Oh well. I will blow up her house later.
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:icontrainernight:
trainernight Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
I'll join you.... *smiles like Russia* :iconrussiaplz:
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:iconzimfan12:
zimfan12 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
Thanx ^^
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:icontrainernight:
trainernight Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
no prob :iconhappyrussiaplz:
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:iconpokemon7777:
pokemon7777 Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconprussiaplz: yea prussia!
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:iconjjgirl99:
jjgirl99 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WHERE DO YOU FIND THOSE?!
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:iconpokemon7777:
pokemon7777 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
how to do a picture?
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:iconjjgirl99:
jjgirl99 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes and no... How do you find the hetalia faces and (since I'm semi new) how do you post cause my computer won't let me...
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:iconpokemon7777:
pokemon7777 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconhetaliajapanplz::icongermanyplz::iconitalyplz: like this?
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:iconjjgirl99:
jjgirl99 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah like that!
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:iconpokemon7777:
pokemon7777 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
umm just how to get the pic because its like this : iconitalyplz: without the space. there is also the preveiw button for all that crap
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:iconjjgirl99:
jjgirl99 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ohh I see.. TY SO MUCH!
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shadow21551 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
XD bye bye bitch!!!
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:iconjambalambam:
jambalambam Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
KGDJHFDKTDSKYHUJ
YES.
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:iconinsanity-piano:
iNSaNiTY-Piano Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
Fug, my name is Claire
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:iconsaskiarijkens:
saskiarijkens Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
will there be a part nine??
please.....??

btw...you are awesome :D
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