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~~~~Dolly's POV~~~~
The girls and I were waiting at the front of the school for (Name). I will tell her something that will make her hate Gilbert.

"There she is Dolly!" We all ran up to her and circled her. 

"Would you bitches get away from me and just leave me alone?!"

"But you have to listen to this first." I took out a tape recorder with a fake recording of Gilbert, Antonio and Francis talking.

"What the hell is that?!" (Name) shouted.

"It's a tape recorder I stuck in Gilbert's car, so you can know why he is after you." I played it.

"(Name) is something else isn't she?"  Francis said.

"Yep, she is one tough cookie to crack." Antonio said.

"I'm vearing her down. Soon, she'll let me screw her then she'll mean nothing to me." Gilbert said. The recording ended.

"So, you see Gilbert never liked you at all, you're just another one night stand of his." I said and walked away. Leaving (Name) behind, with tears in her eyes and hurt.
~~~~(Name)'s POV~~~~
'THAT DAMN BASTARD! I HATE LIFE! I WANT MY PARENTS!' A voice said in (Name)'s head.
But another voice said 'It's not true. He likes me, he does.'
She thought 'At least I hope he does.'
I went to his locker to find him.
~~~~Gilbert's POV~~~~
I vas standing by my locker hoping that (Name) would come by. But instead, Dolly came.

"Hey Gilbert~ Wanna go somewhere~?"

"Go away Dolly..."

"What does she have that I don't?!" Dolly threw herself at her and kissed me.

"Gilbert...Why?"(Name) said crying.

"(Name)...Li-" I tried to say but she cut me off.

"No...It was stupid of me to ever believe that someone like you could be with someone like me. I guess you won Dolly your mission in life is finally complete! You have Gilbert now, made my live even more of a hell than it already is, broke my heart....Hope you're satisfied..." She said.

"Yes, very." Dolly said with the biggest smile on her face.

"VHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?!" I yelled at her.

"Gil...What's wrong? She's nothing." She said.

"Well, at least she's human being with a heart then a stone cold machine like you."

(Name) just ran to the auditorium. 


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Chapter 7:Oh Shit!
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:iconkittykatrocks12:
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I Fucking Hate That Bitch!!!
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:iconromacat:
Romacat Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
Hey....can someone do what Claude did to Alois in Black Butler to Dolly?~ I'd be so happy and I hate Claude so this shows how mad at her I am if I'm mentioning him.
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germanyludwigteehee Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XDOle! Ole! Ole! Ole! 
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Romacat Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015
OLE! XD
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germanyludwigteehee Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BLACK BUTLER FANS IN THE HOUSE!!!!!!! XD Ciel and Lizzy (Huggy) [V1] Ciel Phantomhive (Ahem) [V2] Ciel Phantomhive (Drinking Tea) [V1] Sebastian Michaelis (Hawt Response) [V2] Sebastian Michaelis (Hawt Smile) [V1] Sebastian Michaelis (Kawaii) [V1] Grell Sutcliff (Fangirling) [V2] Grell Sutcliff (Intro) [V2] Undertaker (Sicko) [V2] Finnian (Very sorry) [V1] Angelina Durless (In any case...) [V1] Mey-Rin (Very sorry) [V2] Tanaka (Drinking Tea) [V3] (I still LOVE hetalia though)
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:iconromacat:
Romacat Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015
HELL YEAH!! I LOVE MY Sebas-chan~ Oh yeah I really love Hetalia still too!
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:icongermanyludwigteehee:
germanyludwigteehee Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LOVE MY CIEL-CHAN  ^^ (and lol ya hetalia is just as amazing!!)
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:iconromacat:
Romacat Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015
Lol Ciel is adorable but I love Undertaker so much!
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germanyludwigteehee Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL SAME
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PrussiasKitten Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
DAYYYYMMMMNNN!!!! Some serious shiz is about to throw down!!!
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Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014   Writer
*runs into auditorium with a bunch of friends and random fan girls all wearing 3-D glasses and carrying popcorn and candy and such* ALRIGHT MAKE ROOM, PEOPLE! $12 PER PERSON PER SEAT!!  S**T'S GONNA GO DOWN TODAY!!!!
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PrussiasKitten Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, that is how it is when there is a fight at my school. I am usually going in and helping the one who is being bullied. I can fight. hehe...
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Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014   Writer
I forgotz to say dis, this is for F.R.P(Feelz Removal Purposes) ONLY. Im usually that student who runs for the nearest teacher in dis situation.... Cookie. Pixel Gingerbread Cookie 
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PrussiasKitten Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I understand... I am just a wee bit irrational... my parents say that is because of my Scottish highlander and Viking heritage.... lol.... Oh and YAY!!!! COOKIE!:cookie: Pixel Gingerbread Cookie Emotes cookies tresure :cookies: Blushed Super Happy Flailing Cookie Nomin the Cookie I love cookies Sweet Cookie Bit cookie :3 Normal Cookie if you give me a cookie 
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LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Is there a difference between a hall and and auditorium?
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:iconjadethekidr9:
JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014   General Artist
Me: OHH!!! WE GOT A BADASS OVER HERE!! 
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:iconelka-sakamaki:
Elka-Sakamaki Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Student General Artist
I'm listening to hall of fame while reading this again. Must punch Dolly . That cunt needs a karate chop in the face XD .
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:iconelka-sakamaki:
Elka-Sakamaki Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Student General Artist
My mind is messed up .
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:iconkathybrine:
KathyBrine Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Personally I'd go with a combination of Carrie and Alessa powers on Dolly.
Yay Silent Hill. :D
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:iconstarthecool:
starthecool Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
FAST!!! I really need to punch somebody!!
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:iconsupgal317:
SupGal317 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
*puts pick of Dolly on pillow* is this good enough?
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:iconstarthecool:
starthecool Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
Yes! *punches*
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SupGal317 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014
HAHAHA!VENGEANCE!!!!! >: D
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:iconpurestinnocence:
PurestInnocence Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Student General Artist
At the end of this 'The Deepest Cut' started playing through my mind
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XXEMOhetaliafangirlX Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Student Filmographer
I just wanna fight dolly so bad Llama Emoji 08 (Crying) [V1] 
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mythology-freak Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I would kick dolly in the crotch (personally I would go 'Carrie' on her)
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:iconmaciea:
Maciea Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I agree to bad we don't have telepathic powers
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:iconkathybrine:
KathyBrine Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Or you can use telepathic powers to torture Dolly like Alessa did to the janitor in Silent Hill...
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:iconmythology-freak:
mythology-freak Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHY IS THE WORLD OF PHYSICS SO CRUEL !?
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:iconmaciea:
Maciea Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I know right
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:iconmythology-freak:
mythology-freak Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
right !
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:iconizzeyblackstar:
izzeyblackstar Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
If I was actually going through this I would tell dolly of like this "You know what your a fucking slute. And your a worthless bitch. You can go fuck yourself you fake bitchin' bastard douchebag!"
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Jaaahrnbeeez Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
i salute you :) i couldn't have said it any better myself xD then you throw her off a cliff. jks x3
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:iconizzeyblackstar:
izzeyblackstar Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
No probably mess up her face make it look like alien then throw her off a cliff....
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seerofheros Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I used my oc soma night
Soma: *runs in bawling her eyes out*
Me: Soma what's wrong?!?
Soma: G-Gil ch-cheated on m-m-me!!!
Me: what!?!?!?!?!?!?!? *voice gets darker* Soma I'm going out ok?
Soma: *calming down*ok
Me: see ya *trerns 2p* let's kill a bitch *takes out brass knuckles and gets to the school and finds dolly and pownds her face into a pulp* bitch mess with Soma mess with me. GOT IT?!?!?!?!
Dolly: y-yes
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MixedMuttNeko-Chan Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YEAH! Kill that biatch!
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Dutchnyn Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YEAH! Bitch got slayed!!!
Nynke the Bitchslayer!!!!
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DragonsLuna Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I will get Cave Johnson to give me a combustible lemon and we will burn her house down and the I will personally rip her guts out, eat them, and make sure she is alive by mine and my bro-like-figure's (Iggy) magic so she will feel the pain while I eat her guts! ((An author said, and I quote 'e_e A demon that creates nightmares to feed off of your fear and pain and fill that newly created void with himself, taking over your life and destroying your friends and family one by one?

I don't think he's into allies.' What kind of dragon-human am I?! ...An evil on I suppose. BTW. Eclipse (my OC) and me are the same people))
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trainernight Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Me and Ecila will join you and Iggy!!! :D
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DragonsLuna Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yay! Now let's go get her! *starts laughing manically and runs off*
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trainernight Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
:iconrussiasmileplz: *laughs like a maniac and follows dragging Ecila with me, wand in my left hand, Ecila's in her right*
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DragonsLuna Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Now where is she...? Hehehehehe... *Suddenly turns into dragon form (icon) and starts burning, freezing, electrifying, etc. everything in my sight (except you two and any one who wanted to join).
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trainernight Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Ecila and Arthur: *Using magic to hunt for her*
Me: *turn into my dragon form Blue-Eyes--destroy-them-all  and starts to mimic you(in other words doing the same thing)*
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DragonsLuna Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
*insane laughing* Please slap me, before I kill you guys! *continues laughing*
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trainernight Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Zena: *slaps you* there. *walks off with Burn(her dog) and Yumakemo(a baby panda that's similar to Kumajiro)*
Me: *turns back* hey wait up!! *runs after her*
Ecila: *sighs and walks back towards the airport*
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ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student General Artist
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DragonsLuna Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I don't deserve this kindness! ( I sometimes really don't...)
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RainbowDash-3421 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
If i could like this comment I would
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DragonsLuna Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Awwwwww! Thank you very much!
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I'm gonna have to whip a bitch, I'm gonna have to whip you, I'M GONNA HAVE TO WHIP YOU!!! [if you know what video that's from you are officially my friend]
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