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~~~~(Name)'s POV~~~~
"Girlfriend?! Gilbert stop joking!" I said.

"(Name) is your GIRLFRIEND!" Dolly then screamed on top of her lungs as she always does.

"No freaking way! Prove it then! Kiss her!"

'He better not...'

~~~~Gilbert's POV~~~~
I did what I had to do, I kissed her. And I liked it. But this time is vas different, it actually meant something to me. I think I'm falling in love...
~~~~(Name)'s POV~~~~
At first, I was scared that I would have to burn my face after this, but I didn't. For the first time, I actually feel love towards someone else besides my aunt. I think I'm falling in love with Gilbert...But I know we can't be together...

When he pulled away, his face was a light shade of pink, I was positive I was crimson, while Dolly was freaking RED. 

Dolly was about to hit me, but Gilbert stopped her.

"I think you've done enough to (Name)."

Dolly had a tantrum like a 3-year-old. Then she left with her followers.

"Now, I have something to ask you (Name)."

"Yeah, G-Gilbert?"

"W-Will uh um-"Gilbert stuttered, turning red 

"What he's trying to say is will you go out on a date with him." Francis said stepping in for his friend.

"Yeah that what he said." Gilbert stated.

"No, I'm not until you can say it yourself and properly." I smirked and started to walk away, limping a little.

"At least let us help you to the nurse."

"Fine."

~~~~Dolly's POV~~~~
I didn't really leave the auditorium I was outside where I could hear everything they are saying. 

"W-Will uh um-" I heard Gilbert cutely stutter.

"What he's trying to say is will you go out on a date with him." Francis said.

"Yeah that what he said." Gilbert said so godly that I could just burst.

"No, I'm not until you can say it yourself and properly." WHAT?! THIS BITCH IS CRAZY! HOW COULD TURN DOWN A DATE WITH GILBERT THE HOTTEST AND I MEAN THE  HOTTEST GUY IN SCHOOL! This bitch has not heard the last of me...If it is the last thing I do I will get her next time.

~~~~TIME SKIP! (Name)'s POV~~~~
"That boy Gilbert asked you out on a date?!" my Auntie yelled.

"Yeah, he did or tried to."

"What did you say?"

"I said no."

"WHAT?! The first boy whoever asks you out on a date you turn him down whats wrong with you!"

"Sometimes I wonder who's the teenager here."

"Well why did you?"

"Well, first of all, he wasn't even the one who asked me and lastly there was nothing special about it."

Auntie facepalmed.

'Hopefully he won't give me a Heart Attack.'

I sang a song, 

"Putting my defenses up
'Cause I don't wanna fall in love
If I ever did that,
I think I'd have a heart attack

Never put my love out on the line
Never said yes to the right guy
Never had trouble getting what I want
But when it comes to you i'm never good enough

When I don't care I can play 'em like a Ken doll
Won't wash my hair
Then make 'em bounce like a basketball

But you make me wanna act like a girl
Paint my nails and wear high heels yes you
Make me so nervous
That I just can't hold your hand

You make me glow
But I cover up won't let it show

So i'm putting my defenses up
'Cause I don't wanna fall in love
If I ever did that,
I think I'd have a heart attack

I think I'd have a heart attack

I think I'd have a heart attack

Never break a sweat for the other guys
When ya come around I get paralyzed
And everytime I try to be myself
It comes out wrong like a cry for help
It's just not fair,
Pain's more trouble than love is worth
I gasp for air,
It feels so good but you know it hurts

But you make me wanna act like a girl
Paint my nails and wear perfume for you
Make me so nervous
That I just can't hold your hand

You make me glow
But I cover up won't let it show

So i'm putting my defenses up
'Cause I don't wanna fall in love
If I ever did that,
I think I'd have a heart attack

I think I'd have a heart attack

I think I'd have a heart attack

The feeling got lost in my lungs
They're burning I'd rather be numb
And there's no one else to blame
So scared I take off and I run
I'm flying too close to the sun
And I burst into flames

You make me glow
But I cover up won't let it show

So i'm putting my defenses up
'Cause I don't wanna fall in love
If I ever did that,
I think I'd have a heart attack!

I think I'd have a heart attack

I think I'd have a heart attack

I think I'd have a heart attack

I think I'd have a heart attack..."

'I know what I'm singing at the talent show...'
2 chappie's in one night and it's only 9:45 on a weekend...I gotz the skills!
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4:[link]
Chapter 5:[link]
Chapter 6:Girlfriend?
Chapter 7:[link]
Chapter 8:[link]
Chapter 9:[link]
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SweetHomicide Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I did what I had to do, I kissed her. And I liked it. *sings* He kissed a girl and he liked it!~ Sorry, just couldn't resist. (=^J^=)
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avatarlover2 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2014
I KISSED A GIRL AND LIKED IT THE TASTE OF HER CHERRY CHAPSTICK I REMEMBER THIS SONG
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cancerleovirgo Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
holy shit XD
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tiger-lily-swift Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student Interface Designer
WHAT THE FUCKING NERVE
FIRST SELENA NOW DEMI LOVATO
KILL ME NOW
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Prussia1055000 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Love this, but my brother once told me it was like glee, or high school musical because he says there's people who randomly sings like thT in shows, but I like it the way it is.
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HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student Writer
Yeah, some people point that out, but I wrote this while I was obsessed with Glee, so yeah... :iconidkplz:
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Prussia1055000 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
Well it doesn't really matter, cause it's still a good story.
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SoccerStrider01 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
I absolutely suck at singing..... and eveything else T-T
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:iconkathybrine:
KathyBrine Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Finally...no more axes...
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Aliswonderland101 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
Why is there so much singing!? I mean its a good story but its like a new highschool musical!!!!:frustrated: Revamp 
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Shaliliathehedgehog Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I FUCKING LUV THE SONG!!! This starting to get more interesting!!! X3
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xofandompridexo Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Totally love this song!!!! READER CHAN GONNA BE IN THE TALENT SHOW! yay i could never really do that....... * flies to corner of woe*
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Cuberry1 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student General Artist
and also you should have prussia singing power trip to the reader that would be so cuteThe Monkey With the Nosebleed Nosebleed Plz nosebleed Nosebleed 
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Cuberry1 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student General Artist
luv that song

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:iconallieallred:
allieallred Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY~ i love that song!!!!
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:icontea-and-tai:
tea-and-tai Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Student General Artist
BLOODY HELL!
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PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Which song is this and OH MY GAWD DOLLY STOP BITCHING AND GO FUCK A BARBIE ALREADY JEEBUS. D:< YOU FAUKING BARREL YOU. GAWD YOU'RE WORSE THAN JENNIFER.
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animeee96 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
BARRELS. BARRELS, EVERYWHERE. :iconeverywhereplz:
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:iconplutodemonhoundsgirl:
PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student General Artist
D:< GAWD THOSE FAUKING BARRELS ARE WORSE THAN COCK ROACHES
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DatCougarAssassino Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
They are o.0!! In almost EVERY game there is at least one freaking barrel -_-.... -gets the flamethrower- We bros shall end their existence.....FOR PEWDS!!! :D 
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:iconplutodemonhoundsgirl:
PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student General Artist
BURN BARREL BURN! IT'S GETTING HOTTER
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:icondatcougarassassino:
DatCougarAssassino Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
AWWWWWWWWW YEAAAAAAHHHH!!!! >:D Burn barrels!! 0:<
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:iconplutodemonhoundsgirl:
PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Student General Artist
I SHALL BURN THEE IN THE FIRES OF HELL AND CRUSH THY SPIRIT.
BEGONE FOUL BARREL. THE POWER OF SATAN-I MEAN GESUS COMPELLS YOU.

:icongetsomeplz::icongetsomeplz::icongetsomeplz::icongetsomeplz::icongetsomeplz::icongetsomeplz:
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DatCougarAssassino Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
LOL what are those green things XD they look so cute and funny!
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animeee96 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
THEY'RE ALSO WORSE THAN THE JUMPING SPIDERS. BY THE NAME OF STEPHANO, I BANISH THE BARRELS FROM THIS WORLD!!!!
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PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student General Artist
WE MUST DO IT FOR PEWDS.

BUT WAIT. WHAT ABOUT THE DUCKS?! THEY WERE GOING AFTER HIM.
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animeee96 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
ROASTED DUCK. ASIAN STYLE. PROBLEMO SOLVED.

What are we supposed to do about the bros?

(Pewdiepie fans unite!!! *brofist*)
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PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Student General Artist
GIVE THEM AAAALLLLL PUPPY HEADS

Sup Bro?

NEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

:iconstephanobrofistplz:
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seerofheros Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
F\|cking barrels lets hope that all barrels are distroyed
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BlackAngelLight Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
Demi Lovato - Heart Attack
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:iconplutodemonhoundsgirl:
PlutoDemonHoundsGirl Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Yush.
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jambalambam Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Heh, if this was me and I faced this bitch Dolly and she thinks she knows torture. TRY ME BITCH. I GOT ONE MESSED UP MIND READY TO COME AT YOU BRO.
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NinjaKitty1162 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:DDDDDDDD I LOVE THAT SONG! Is it ironic that I was listening to it while reading it and then finding it in the story?
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HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student Writer
I've listening to it all weekend...
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NinjaKitty1162 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Same here! That and Vocaloid
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HetailiaUniverse-XD Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Writer
Cool
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